When I walked on to the podium I felt like I was on top of the world. I got 2nd in BMX racing. I got a silver medal. When I went over to the jump I felt like I went over the moon. When I went around the corner I felt buzzed. I saw my team mates and the tv cameras. I knew my family and friend in N.Z were watching. I felt lucky to be in the NZ Olympics team.
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Wow brax! That must of been super scary. How many people we watching?
ReplyDeleteHi Braxton,
ReplyDeletethat was so epic reading the story. I liked how you put in adjectives. What country came first and third?
Carys